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Saturday, December 3, 2011

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When He said he wanted to see her before he leaves for his Surgery,She did not even know how to react.He was the man she loved most in her Life,she was the woman he dreamed of.She always thought it was the perfect Love story.Her love, his madness, their commitment , There was nothing she could wish for except his companionship for the rest of her life.


Time had been tough on them both,and she always thought it will end just fine, with them together at the end of the day was all she was concerned about.She did whatever she could have done in her power to fight for her love.Actually she did more then that,and she hoped for things to get better and they never did.He said he was trying and she knew he was and still she felt betrayed when he failed her expectations again and again.


Love is unconditional they say.But sometimes it is not.These are the times when your whole Life depends on one single move by the one you look up to for love, affection and loyalty.You wait and wait and wait with all your zeal and your wishes and your dreams and your prayers pinned on that one single move and then you find out that there is no hope left for you..There is nothing but this shrill and sharp Eco of your unvoiced cries and your unsaid words and unshod tears.So yes she encountered one such time too which left her all strained and shallow, shallow and stuck, stuck in that moment of sheer disappointment.Disappointment that engulfed her heart so tightly that she refused to have any apologies,any answer.


She does not remember for how long she stayed like that,that camouflaged and unmoved.It was not that long but it was powerful enough to shake her whole world upside down.Then Out of her spirits, she arises again, gathers her shattered pieces one by one and sips the pain with due share of bitterness, and then Just a little while ago when she is about to put her broken pieces all together, arrives he again, who still has this impact on her, the impact like a magic spell, a magic spell that makes her forget her injured ,shallow soul.She struggles hard to avoid the impact, tries her shield of self-respect and failed miserably.Yet she tells him that the tale is over, that the princess is no more in that cage, the cruel ,ruthless magician is failed and so is his spells.


He listens to her quietly while his  gaze fixed on her the whole time, the gaze that held her a captive all these days,weeks,months and years.. and there she feels the first crack.The shield is of no use,not anymore.It can fight back the betrayal and lies but not that gaze,and yet she finds herself standing  in front of him again, with her heart on her palm again and all she could ask him is that, if its her soul that he wants this time!


But its not her soul that he wants, its her time.He said he wants to see her before he leaves for his brain surgery,he wants to see her smiling before he goes for a battle that has very few chances for him.


She does not know how to react, she does not know if she could feel anything anymore,He was dying and all she thought of was her disappointments and failed expectations.


So they say Love is blind, she recalls in her mind..and she could not see this coming,all she thought of was her share of the stakes and her loss and her grief.Then she suddenly recalled how ruthlessly she declared his part of the deal nothing but a deception and betrayal.,Is Love selfish too!?, she wonders,How could she not come up with one excuse of giving him a Benefit of Doubt! How could she deny him her mercy! and they say Love is Patient and kind...she is not sure, she decides, but one thing that she knows about love now is that its Selfish and Cruel and it can truly take the breathes away..


She is stuck into thoughts,in this one moment of realization while he waits for her answer..




(yes then she went to see him, to see him for the one last time,and em too drained to share the details of that meeting this moment.so you guys will have to wait for the next part)

29 comments:

  1. This was ouchfully beautiful Mishi. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

    Bring it out soon.

    Lotsa love,
    Soumya

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  2. General perception about Love is its blindness; makes you feel good. Yet the most saddening thing in the world is loving someone who used to love you. Here, love makes you cry
    Nevertheless, love is lost the moment the matrimony between the two lovers actually takes place, as a gradual erosion of same love and that’s the end of STORY.
    Your post is a touchy story of the two genuine lovers (out of wedlock) and climax is not reached yet and we, the audience, are getting real curious.

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  3. Hello.
    This was a pleasant & totally unexpected surprise from you Mishi. I'm very impressed...but you tease us with this heartbreaker, then leave us hanging! Now, I'm intrigued as to what will happen next. Don't keep us waiting too long!
    Very nicely done.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate your comment.

    My latest:
    More Fulfilling With Love

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  4. Arise from your slumber and boogie back on over here with more details, Mishilicious! We're hanging on the edge of our bunskis here and it's getting kinda chilly :P

    "Love is unconditional they say.But sometimes it is not.These are the times when your whole Life depends on one single move by the one you look up to for love, affection and loyalty ... "

    I really identified with this part ~

    A beautiful read and nice to see you posting again ~ I'll be back for the next chapter :)

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  5. And those who loved, could never reach their destiny.
    Yet the ones who kept struggling, saw their destiny standing by their side.
    So I looked upon the shattered pieces, and killed my image from your heart.


    Beautifully written. :D Waiting for the next chapter.

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  6. beautiful!
    It was awsum
    I felt chills on my back while reading...cant wait for the nxt part

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  7. Beautiful, compelling and written with great strength. A fine write which engaged me fully throughout.

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  8. its such a beautiful story, quite inspirational

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  9. pinches deep in the heart :)

    Weakest LINK

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  10. hmmmmm! mishi nicely done =)

    I hope things end up well. a pray =)

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  11. very impressive!
    touching ... you have always been expressive in your blogs..the content is very tight and gripping!
    will wait for next part!

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  12. you know you should write like this more often :)) please dont mistake me i love your short and humorous take too...this one adds variety ::) luved it :)

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  13. very moving. nicely written - controlled yet flowing smoothly.

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  14. Mishley! :)
    I wish you'd blog oftener so that I could witness the production of ingenious and feel small and tiny in front of such literary skills .. :D
    **But its not her soul that he wants, its her time.
    There is a certain connection I have with that line ..
    You are such a beautiful writer. I eagerly await your write ups. :*

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  15. whoaaa..... am i glad i came here ...

    Your post was beautiful, well written, the depth and pain was so well etched that one could literally feel it as well ...

    a post of such intensity can def leave one drained, am waiting to read the next bit :)

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  16. Mishi,

    Too captivating. Hope it is fiction. If true, I feel so much for her.

    Take care

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  17. who says love is unconditional? only in books and movies... in real world we always expect something in return for the love we shower on somebody... very strong post ...

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  18. Sometimes I wish it was easier to understand love and the things people do when they are in love. I really doubt that unconditional love exists. You have also made me wonder how selfish and how merciful love really is. Nicely written Mishi! Waiting for the last meeting :)

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  19. :) Waiting for the part two.

    I liked these lines a lot..."Love is unconditional they say.But sometimes it is not.These are the times when your whole Life depends on one single move by the one you look up to for love, affection and loyalty"

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  20. Wrong to say that Love is uncoditional.. It is full of conditions , you dont realise when you are in love its only when things go wrong that you realise what it was and how it was

    Love is a word that is used too much in all context ..

    when you posting the next part :)

    Bikram's

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  21. I will agree with Indis's number one blog here,you should write more like this mishi.you are equally good with fiction.it was one great read

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  22. great, nice and beautiful words combination for a true love story. like it. tnx

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  23. Thankyou everyone for your great feed back,..I hope you will remember them in your prayers too....em sorry I could not reply to your comment individually ..I had issues with my Blogger again:-(

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  24. i really like this mishi...over to part 2 nw

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